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I believe people should equip with other languages even as fluent English speakers. There is an opinion that English is the universal language, so people could easily communicate with the English skill. However, many countries do not have English as a first language. Therefore, there could be some barriers to full communication. Alongside this, empathetic listening is beneficial in understanding a different culture. This type of listening is impossible without full comprehension of the counterpart. In this sense, speaking other languages helps understand others.

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I believe people should equip with other languages even as fluent English speakers. 
>> I believe that people, even as fluent English speakers, should equip themselves with other languages. 

There is an opinion that English is the universal language, so people could easily communicate with the English skill.
>> There is an opinion that English is the universal language, so people could easily communicate in this language. 
>> or: There is a popular opinion that English is the lingua franca, and is viewed as the common means of communication for speakers of different natives tongues. 

 However, many countries do not have English as a first language.
>> correct

 Therefore, there could be some barriers to full communication. 
>>  Therefore, there could be some barriers to comprehensible and unambiguous communication. 

Alongside this, empathetic listening is beneficial in understanding a different culture. 
>> correct

This type of listening is impossible without full comprehension of the counterpart.
>> [What do you mean by 'counterpart' here? This sentence is a bit ambiguous.]

 In this sense, speaking other languages helps understand others.
>> correct
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