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If I am a tortoise, mabye my life will be boring.

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Tortoise live there life for 50 years over. We can say: "hmm..I think they live very short!", but tortoise are animals, and we are human. We are diffrent. Tortoise's 50 years is human's 100 years. Then we can say: "Oh..they live very much...". We can do anything when we are 50 years old, but when it is over and became 100 years old, it will be boring, because 100 years old is very old, and mabye I will in our hospital, because I'm sick. Mabye tortoise are same too, if they live for 50 years it is almost 100 years old for human, so if I am tortoise, mabye my life will be boring.

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Good evening Maria!

If you would live a long life then you must have a lot of goals and accomplish a lot of tasks. The tortoise is the same- it will lay a lot of eggs and keep swimming the vast ocean until it becomes tired and lay eggs again and again. They will meet other sea creatures and just enjoy their lives as the ocean is an endless adventure.

So, do you think the tortoise has a boring life? Let's ask one when we see it. I think we will never get an answer.

See you soon!

-T. Donna =)

Tortoise live there life for 50 years over. We can say: "hmm..I think they live very short!", but tortoise are animals, and we are human. 
>> Tortoise live in the sea and on land for over 50 years. We can say: "Hmm..I think they live very shortly!" But tortoise are animals, and we are humans. 

We are diffrent. Tortoise's 50 years is human's 100 years. Then we can say: "Oh..they live very much...". 
>> We are different. Tortoise's 50 years is human's 100 years. Then we can say: "Oh, they live very long." 

We can do anything when we are 50 years old, but when it is over and became 100 years old, it will be boring, because 100 years old is very old, and mabye I will in our hospital, because I'm sick. 
>> We can do anything when we are 50 years old, but when it is over and become 100 years old, it will be boring because 100 years old is very old and maybe I will be in a hospital, because I'm sick. 

Mabye tortoise are same too, if they live for 50 years it is almost 100 years old for human, so if I am tortoise, mabye my life will be boring.
>> Maybe tortoise are the same too, if they live for 50 years it is almost 100 years old for humans. So if I am a tortoise, maybe my life will be boring.
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