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Do we need to be honest all the time?

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I think we don¡¯t need to be honest all the time. Rather we should know how to lie and sometimes there are some situation that we have to lie. But too much lie cause problems. We should know not to be honest in the right way.

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Hi Heidi ! Yes! There are times that we really need to lie but we shouldn't make it a habit. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I think we don¡¯t need to be honest all the time. 
>>CORRECT

Rather we should know how to lie and sometimes there are some situation that we have to lie. 
>> We should rather know when to lie because there are some situations where we need to lie. 

But too much lie cause problems. 
>> Although, too much lying would cause problems. 

We should know not to be honest in the right way.
>>  CORRECT
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