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1. "I think there's a real limiting on the amount of expression that people have now, because they are so used to looking on their cell phones and such," said Carol Osthemier of Youngstown. How much do you agree or disagree?

I agree with Carol Osthemier because cell phone could limit expressions.

2. What would you do if you couldn't use your cellphone for a month?

I will use other way (example : Watching Youtube video, Playing Solitaire) to relieve stress.

3. How often do you change cell phones?

I don't change my phone as long as my phone doesn't have any problem.

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Hello Geonha! Nice job!

~Teacher Sheila


I agree with Carol Osthemier because cell phone could limit expressions.
>>I  agree with Carol Osthemier because cellphones could limit expressions.

I will use other way (example : Watching Youtube video, Playing Solitaire) to relieve stress.
>>I will use other ways like watching YouTube videos and playing solitaire to relieve my stress.

I don't change my phone as long as my phone doesn't have any problem.
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