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Travel could fulfill education purposes for the following reasons. Traveling is an excellent way to learn about a different culture. Some can learn historical aspects from visiting the museum, art galleries, and traditional sites. At the same time, others can learn cultural aspects from trying out different cuisine. Apart from that travel provide us with an excellent opportunity to challenge language skills. Many say speaking is the most efficient method to learn new languages. Talking with natives in various circumstances will help people to polish their language skills and gain confidence.

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Thank you once again for this Aciel. Exposure through experiences is definitely a good way to learn something.

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>>> Traveling could fulfill educational purposes for the following reasons.   
Traveling is an excellent way to learn about a different culture. 
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Some can learn historical aspects from visiting the museum, art galleries, and traditional sites. 
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At the same time, others can learn cultural aspects from trying out different cuisine. 
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>>> OR: In addition, others can learn cultural aspects from trying out different cuisines. 
Apart from that travel provide us with an excellent opportunity to challenge language skills. 
>>>  Apart from that, traveling provides us with an excellent opportunity to challenge our language skills.  
Many say speaking is the most efficient method to learn new languages. 
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Talking with natives in various circumstances will help people to polish their language skills and gain confidence.
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