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I saw the news about the contract between Beyond Meat and Mc'donald which was made recently. Beyond Meat is the company which produce plant based meat. Mc'donald has started to sell vegan burger which is used vegetarian meat instead of meat fatty because many people ban to eat meat due to their health, protecting animals and so on. Professionals say that vegetarian meat can be alternative meat which has similar tasty, texture of food and similar shape. I am not sure if people can be satisfied with these food, but I guess if we don't have any choice, people will be get used to it because humans are good at adapt in any environment. This also mean people can have right of choice so we can be widen the selection of menu. However, I am not sure if the sales will be successful.

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I saw the news about the contract between Beyond Meat and McDonald which was made recently.
>>> CORRECT
 Beyond Meat is the company which produce plant based meat.
>>> CORRECT
 Mc'Donald has started to sell vegan burger which is used vegetarian meat instead of meat fatty because many people ban to eat meat due to their health, protecting animals and so on. 
>>>  McDonald has started to sell vegan burger which used vegetarian meat instead of fatty meat because many people ban to eat meat due to their health, protecting animals and so on. 
Professionals say that vegetarian meat can be alternative meat which has similar tasty, texture of food and similar shape.
>>> Professionals say that vegetarian meat can be an alternative meat which has similar taste, texture and shape.
 I am not sure if people can be satisfied with these food, but I guess if we don't have any choice, people will be get used to it because humans are good at adapt in any environment.
>>>  I am not sure if people can be satisfied with these food, but I guess if we don't have any choice, people will get used to it because humans are good at adapting in any environment.
 This also mean people can have right of choice so we can be widen the selection of menu. 
>>>  This also means that people can have the right of choice so we can  widen the selection of menu. 
However, I am not sure if the sales will be successful.
>>> CORRECT
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