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Yes, I afraid of the great white shark.

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I love sea and also I love sea creatures, but I don't like everything. I love a lot of jellyfish, gold fish, also I like seaweed, but I don't like whale, and shark. I don't like the great white shark the best. When I was 6 grade in elementary school, I like the great white shark the best, because they are so cute ( the song of "the baby shark" there is a baby shark family. The family is so cute, that's why I like the great white shark), but now, I don't like the great white shark. Last Sunday, I watch some shark movie. The name of movie was , that movie is surprised, if you see this movie, you will continue to be surprised. It's suddenly popping out of nowhere, but it will be a little annoying. Anyway, I don't like, and I afraid of the great white shark.

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Hello Maria!

The great whale shark balances the nature of the sea. They are scary because people go near them and the sharks think that they are threatening them.

We need to leave them alone so that they will do the same.

Thanks for doing your homework early!

See you!

-T. Donna =)

I love sea and also I love sea creatures, but I don't like everything. 
>> I love the sea and also I love sea creatures, but I don't like everything. 

I love a lot of jellyfish, gold fish, also I like seaweed, but I don't like whale, and shark. 
>> Correct! 
Or: I love a lot of jellyfish, gold fish, also I like seaweed, but I don't like whale and shark. 

I don't like the great white shark the best. When I was 6 grade in elementary school, I like the great white shark the best, because they are so cute ( the song of "the baby shark" there is a baby shark family. 
>> I don't like the great white shark of all. When I was on 6th grade in elementary school, I like the great white shark the best, because they are so cute ( the song of "the baby shark". There is a baby shark family. 

The family is so cute, that's why I like the great white shark), but now, I don't like the great white shark. 
>> Correct!

Last Sunday, I watch some shark movie. The name of movie was , that movie is surprised, if you see this movie, you will continue to be surprised. 
>> Last Sunday, I watch some shark movie. The name of movie was ___________. That movie is full of surprise. If you see this movie, you will continue to be surprised. 

It's suddenly popping out of nowhere, but it will be a little annoying. Anyway, I don't like, and I afraid of the great white shark.
>> It's suddenly popping out of nowhere, so it is a little annoying. Anyway, I don't like it, and I'm afraid of the great white shark.
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