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1. The news says that the coronavirus epidemic has led to fewer divorces. But other crisis like financial difficulties led to more divorces. Of course, It is difference of epidemic and financial difficulties. In fact, there is something mentioned as a real cause. This is a decrease in population and marriage.
2. I think the reason why the divorce rate has decreased due to coronavirus is because the time spent together at home has increased. Many people think that the more time couple shares, the more they fight. I think it is exactly the opposite. Let¡¯s think about school days. The longer time we spend with our friends, the better we understand each other. I think thanks to coronavirus, many couples understand each other as much as they share a lot of times.

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Well done, Cleo! I like your answers. You definitely answered straight to the point! Stay safe and enjoy your weekend! -Faith-
1. The news says that the coronavirus epidemic has led to fewer divorces. 
>> CORRECT
But other crisis like financial difficulties led to more divorces.
>> But, other crises like financial difficulties led to more divorces.
Of course, It is difference of epidemic and financial difficulties.
>> Of course, the effects of the epidemic and financial difficulties are different.
In fact, there is something mentioned as a real cause. 
>> In fact, there is one real cause that is mentioned in it.
This is a decrease in population and marriage.
>> This is due to the decrease in population and marriage.
2. I think the reason why the divorce rate has decreased due to coronavirus is because the time spent together at home has increased. 
>> CORRECT
OR I think the decrease of the divorce rate amidst the coronavirus pandemic is because of the longer time they are together.
Many people think that the more time couple shares, the more they fight. 
>> Many people think that the more time couples share, the more they fight. 
I think it is exactly the opposite.
>> CORRECT
Let¡¯s think about school days. 
>> CORRECT
The longer time we spend with our friends, the better we understand each other. 
>> CORRECT
I think thanks to coronavirus, many couples understand each other as much as they share a lot of times.
>> I should say thanks to the coronavirus, many couples understand each other because they have more time together.
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