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Q:What was the best gift your grandparents gave you?
A:My best gift from my grandparents are the money.
First, money is very useful object in this country, because everybody use money when they have to buy something they have to.
Second, if I have many money, then I can use it to buy something that I want to or I have to.
Third, money is use when we do something on computer, because we use electronic power when we use computer or our phone.
Last, money is very important thing when I have to live my self, because we use money when we buy something to eat,use,or live.

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Hello there Paul! Great work!

~Teacher Sheila


My best gift from my grandparents are the money.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The best gift I received from my grandparents are money.

First, money is very useful object in this country, because everybody use money when they have to buy something they have to.
>>First, money is very useful object in this country because everybody uses money when they have to buy something.

Second, if I have many money, then I can use it to buy something that I want to or I have to.
>>Second, if I have a lot of money then I can use it to buy something that I want.

Third, money is use when we do something on computer, because we use electronic power when we use computer or our phone.
>>Third, money is used when we do something on the computer because we use electronic power when we use the computer or our phone.

Last, money is very important thing when I have to live my self, because we use money when we buy something to eat,use,or live.
>>Last, money is a very important thing when I have to live by myself because we use money when we buy something to eat or live.
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