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How can travelling be educational?

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Traveling provides a lot of experience and education. First, learn and understand the language used in that country. and learn about the culture of that country. get to know the culture, you will be able to understand the philosophy of value education in that country. And Ican make friends with people in the travel area. Through conversations with people from other countries, know about what I didn't know and share it with each other. In addition, many other things show that travel is educational.

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Hi Steve! That's true! Traveling is very educational and fun. Not only will you be enjoying, but you'll get to know a lot of new things too! :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

Traveling provides a lot of experience and education. 
>> CORRECT 

First, learn and understand the language used in that country. and learn about the culture of that country. 
>> First, learn and understand the language used in that country. and learn about the culture of that country. 

get to know the culture, you will be able to understand the philosophy of value education in that country. 
>> I can get to knot the culture and understand the philosophy of education in the country. 

And I can make friends with people in the travel area. 
>> I can also make new friends when I travel 

Through conversations with people from other countries, know about what I didn't know and share it with each other.
>> Through conversing with the  people there, we can discover new things and share it with other people. 

 In addition, many other things show that travel is educational.
>> In addition, there are many things that shows how traveling is educational. 
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