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I love Jeans and over fit wear.

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I love jeans and over fit wear. Pretty jeans and beautiful over fit is look so good. If I diet and being slim, I will wear this clothes and go out with my friends, so first picture of that two picture is not me. I'm not the one wearing red, blue, and green clothes, but I got them from Naver. I think he's a man...There's a picture that I posted for the second time. It's a picture that I took with my friend when we went to Everland together in the 6th grade. The right one is me, and the left one is my friend. My outfit was overfit. As you can see, I like casual clothes. It's not too uncomfortable for others to see and it's comfortable for me too. How about you??^^

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Good evening Maria!

It is a pretty comfortable and convenient clothing, I like it too! For me, I love wearing dresses and high heels because they make me look like  a pretty lady.

If you grow older, perhaps you will be able to explore more types of clothing and your choices will be wider.

I would like to thank you for this composition and for sending me the two photos, I really appreciate it!

See you soon in class!

-T. Donna =)

I love jeans and over fit wear. Pretty jeans and beautiful over fit is look so good. 
>> I love jeans and over fit wear. Pretty jeans and beautiful over fit look so good. 

If I diet and being slim, I will wear this clothes and go out with my friends, so first picture of that two picture is not me. 
>> If I diet and become slim, I will wear this clothes and go out with my friends, so the first picture of the two pictures is not me. 

I'm not the one wearing red, blue, and green clothes, but I got them from Naver. 
>> Correct!

I think he's a man...There's a picture that I posted for the second time. 
>> Correct! 
Or: I think he's a man. There's a picture that I posted for the second time. 

It's a picture that I took with my friend when we went to Everland together in the 6th grade. 
>> ...on the 6th grade.

The right one is me, and the left one is my friend. My outfit was overfit. 
>> On the right side is me, and on the left is my friend. My outfit was an overfit. 

As you can see, I like casual clothes. 
>> Correct!

It's not too uncomfortable for others to see and it's comfortable for me too. How about you??^^
>> Correct!
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