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artist and freedom

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I fully agree that an artist should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.
To complete an artwork, the artist will burn up his soul and his heart into it.
I also used to spend my all time sometimes to do a important work.
That time, I needed time to be alone.

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Hi Eun Ha!
I think we have the same personality when it comes to work.
Let's compare tomorrow.
Let's also share our experiences. ^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I fully agree that an artist should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.
>> Correct
To complete an artwork, the artist will burn up his soul and his heart into it.
>> To complete an artwork, the artist will put his soul and his heart into it.
I also used to spend my all time sometimes to do a important work.
>> I'm also used to spending all of my time doing important work. 
That time, I needed time to be alone.
>> During those times, I really need to be alone. 
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