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Because, they wnat to show it to someone else.
>>> Because, they want to show it to someone else.
Also to enjoy to self-satisfaction of the time.
>>> Also to enjoy self-satisfaction time.
When you buy something, you think about weather it is necessary.
>>> When you buy something, you have to consider the weather.
Also, you should never buy something to show off to others.
>>> CORRECT
And think about the price you can afford.
>>> Also, think about the price if it's  affordable.
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