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Why do you think people of all ages like watching cartoons?

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I think that people of all ages watch cartoons because of its imagination. Almost every cartoon is fantasy. So many cartoons have their own specialty. Also, they have no limit because cartoons are made by imagination.

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Hi Kai!

Thanks for sending your homework. 

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Jean~~


I think that people of all ages watch cartoons because of its imagination.
>> [This sentence is a big vague because of the phrase "its imagination". Whose imagination? Is the people? Is the cartoons? But if it were the cartoons, do you mean to say that cartoons have imagination?]
>> I think that people of all ages watch cartoons because of the kind of stories created. 

Almost every cartoon is fantasy. 
>> Almost every cartoon is a fantasy. 

So many cartoons have their own specialty.
>> correct

 Also, they have no limit because cartoons are made by imagination.
>> Also, they have no limit because cartoons are made by people's imagination.

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