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What do you think will happen if your country is overpopulated?

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If our country become overpopulated, I think many thing will change. There will be prons and cons but I think it not that bad. Maybe there will many people to work and helpful fo country so I think it can be good.

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Hi Heidi! This is true. There would be a lot of pros and cons but it depends on the government on how they're going to handle it. 

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If our country become overpopulated, I think many thing will change. 
>> If our country would become overpopulated, a lot of things will change. 

There will be prons and cons but I think it not that bad. 
>> There would be pros and cons but I think it won't be that severe. 

Maybe there will many people to work and helpful fo country so I think it can be good.
>> Maybe there would be more people working so it's beneficial to the economy, which is a good thing. 
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