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I will becuse they need help and and we have money to give them .
riget now there are many people needing money more then us so we give some free money and right a letter for luck.
and we do it in a program calld good naburs in Korea and they show they are happy

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Hello Ruby, 
I see. I think helping others makes us feel happy, so it's good to continue helping others.
I will becuse they need help and and we have money to give them.
>> I will because they need help and we have some money to give them.
riget now there are many people needing money more then us so we give some free money and right a letter for luck.
>> Right now there many people needing money more than us, so we give some money freely and write them a letter to wish them luck.
and we do it in a program calld good naburs in Korea and they show they are happy
>> We do it in a program called " Good Neighbors" in Korea, and they show that they are happy.
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