¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±Ç*¿ø
2021-03-24 3539

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

(I couldn¡¯t read the news because the URL address disappeared. Therefore I just guessed the news and answered the question.)

1. I disagree with this opinion. Korean foreign minister is a woman who is heavier than 50kg but she isn¡¯t lazy rather she is a shrewd person.
I think self-discipline is more related to personality than weight.

2. If women have body anxiety to meet the standards of beauty, I want to say ¡®Don¡¯t mind it¡¯.
In fact, anywhere in the world, women have body anxiety because most women have been evaluated for their appearance since they were young.
It was taken for granted for women to have a pretty face and slim body.
Wearing a makeup when women become an adult is a natural thing in the world.
But we should note that it is only imposed on women not men.
Women care too much about their appearance because of a social atmosphere.
To improve human right of woman, we should don¡¯t mind our appearance.
It is time to stub out double standards.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Cleo! Your answer was informative. I guess you are good at guessing! I love how you explain your opinions. Keep it up!-Faith-
(I couldn¡¯t read the news because the URL address disappeared. 
>> CORRECT 
Therefore I just guessed the news and answered the question.)
>> CORRECT 
1. I disagree with this opinion. 
>> CORRECT 
OR I see eye to eye with the writer.
Korean foreign minister is a woman who is heavier than 50kg but she isn¡¯t lazy rather she is a shrewd person.
>> The Korean foreign minister is a woman who is heavier than 50kg but she isn¡¯t lazy rather she is a shrewd person.
I think self-discipline is more related to personality than weight.
>> CORRECT 
2. If women have body anxiety to meet the standards of beauty, I want to say ¡®Don¡¯t mind it¡¯.
>> If women have body anxiety to meet the standards of beauty, I want to say, ¡®Don¡¯t mind it!¡¯
In fact, anywhere in the world, women have body anxiety because most women have been evaluated for their appearance since they were young.
>> In fact, anywhere in the world, women have body anxiety because most women have been evaluated by their appearance since they were young.
It was taken for granted for women to have a pretty face and slim body.
>> The standard of the society is to see women with pretty face and slim body.
Wearing a makeup when women become an adult is a natural thing in the world.
>> Women wearing makeup is a natural thing in the world.
But we should note that it is only imposed on women not men.
>> But we should note that it is only imposed on women not on men.
Women care too much about their appearance because of a social atmosphere.
>> Women care too conscious about their appearance because of the social custom.
To improve human right of woman, we should don¡¯t mind our appearance
>> To improve women rights, we should not mind our appearance too much.
It is time to stub out double standards.
>> CORRECT
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
107533 Do you think people don\'t read enough books these days? ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 632
107532 Homework ¾ç*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 0
107531 To Gina ÇÑ*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 3
107530 Do you believe that \"we are what we eat?\" And why? ±è*ä ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 1
107529 Task ÀÌ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-15 616
107528 Mask mandate for all indoor spaces touches off controversy À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 2
107527 Homework (262) ¹Ú*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 723
107526 Homework °­*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 716
107525 homework ±è*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 2
107524 Stay where I live now ¾È*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 1
107523 What musical instruments are unique to your country or culture? Ȳ*Á¶ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 638
107522 [04/13]Homework ¹Ú*¹ü ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 1
107521 My expectation ÁÖ*³ª ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 2
107520 Rude people ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 883
107519 homework ±è*ºñ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 0
107518 How do you see yourself in five years? À¯*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 1
107517 grammar ¼Õ*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 728
107516 What is /are your greatest professional weakness (es)? À¯*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 1
107515 [04/12]Homework ¹Ú*¹ü ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 1
107514 HOMEWORK Á¤*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-04-14 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04