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the advantages and disadvantages of learning English in an English-speaking country

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There are a number of benefits learning English in an English-speaking country. Firstly, you can acquire English easier because you have to speak only English in their country. Secondly, you can also learn the culture of their country naturally because of making native friends.

However, there are many disadvantages learning English in an English-speaking country. You need to pay high costs to learn English in an English-speaking country such as language school, accommodation, airplane charge and so on. Moreover, you do not have enough time to go abroad, if you have a job.

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Good evening sir Andy. Nice composition. ^_^ Try to speak it in a natural way. 
T. Irene
There are a number of benefits learning English in an English-speaking country. 
>>> There are a number of benefits to learning English in an English-speaking country. 
Firstly, you can acquire English easier because you have to speak only English in their country. 
>>> Correct. 
Secondly, you can also learn the culture of their country naturally because of making native friends.
>>> Secondly, you can also learn the culture of their country spontaneously by making friends with local people.
However, there are many disadvantages learning English in an English-speaking country. 
>>> However, there are many disadvantages of learning English in an English-speaking country. 
You need to pay high costs to learn English in an English-speaking country such as language school, accommodation, airplane charge and so on. 
>>> Correct. 
Moreover, you do not have enough time to go abroad, if you have a job.
>>> Correct. 
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