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After I got this homework, I thought about this. I realized that I nearly do nothing to change our country's education. Just I do my best for my children to grow up to be good men not only rich men or not be selfish. Maybe this is small change of education comparing with the past education attitude.

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Hello, Ju Yeong. ^^ I hope you find it challenging instead of difficult. kkk~ Thank you still for sharing your thoughts on this topic. It has been a long time coming. I was interested in what your thoughts are on this topic with you being a teacher. I appreciate your input. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Maybe we can talk about it in class tomorrow. ~Teacher Jane c",)


After I got this homework, I thought about this.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: After getting this homework, I thought about it deeply.

I realized that I nearly do nothing to change our country's education.
>> CORRECT =)

Just I do my best for my children to grow up to be good men not only rich men or not be selfish.
>> I just do my best for my children/ students for them to grow up to be good men not only rich men and not to be selfish.

Maybe this is small change of education comparing with the past education attitude.
>> Maybe this will make a small difference in the present education system and to the past attitude of people towards education.
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