¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

It is very difficult question!

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¿µ
2021-03-24 2573

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

After I got this homework, I thought about this. I realized that I nearly do nothing to change our country's education. Just I do my best for my children to grow up to be good men not only rich men or not be selfish. Maybe this is small change of education comparing with the past education attitude.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Ju Yeong. ^^ I hope you find it challenging instead of difficult. kkk~ Thank you still for sharing your thoughts on this topic. It has been a long time coming. I was interested in what your thoughts are on this topic with you being a teacher. I appreciate your input. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Maybe we can talk about it in class tomorrow. ~Teacher Jane c",)


After I got this homework, I thought about this.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: After getting this homework, I thought about it deeply.

I realized that I nearly do nothing to change our country's education.
>> CORRECT =)

Just I do my best for my children to grow up to be good men not only rich men or not be selfish.
>> I just do my best for my children/ students for them to grow up to be good men not only rich men and not to be selfish.

Maybe this is small change of education comparing with the past education attitude.
>> Maybe this will make a small difference in the present education system and to the past attitude of people towards education.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
106590 What foods do you think you\'d find impossible to give up? ½Å*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 3405
106589 What are the pros and cons of working out? ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 4779
106588 HW °¨*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 0
106587 COVID-19 won\'t be the last pandemic of our lifetime À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 1
106586 How to protect yourself from fine dust, spring\'s unwelcome guest À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 1
106585 homework ÀÌ*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 5350
106584 What is the importance of having time with your family? Çã*´Ã ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 2
106583 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 1
106582 zz º¯*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 1
106581 Homework 3.16 Àå*º° ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 3996
106580 In most of the countries, people prefer to live in a rented... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 4935
106579 Which is your favorite sense? ±è*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 3988
106578 Homework ¾ç*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 1
106577 Homework should be limited Á¤*¼º ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 4832
106576 family time ¼³*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 4420
106575 COMPOSITION º¯*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 1
106574 Homework º¯*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 1
106573 Composition º¯*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 1
106572 ±Ç*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2021-03-16 4890
106571 When is immigration helpful to a country and when is harmful? È«*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2021-03-15 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04