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Tips for foreigners.

작성자: 김*환
2021-03-24 2606

회원님의 영작문

If i give a tip for foreigners who comes to Korea. Maybe the first is that you never use a taxi in airport. There are some reasons. First, Korea has grate public transportation. Although you don't use a taxi, you never feel uncomfortable. Using a taxi is quit expensive than using public transportation. Second, many taxi drivers will cheat you. Many foreigners have experiences about taxi fare. Basic taxi fare is about 3 dollars, but many taxi drivers demand foreigners for hundred dollars. We have an accusation system, but they couldn't report.
Using a taxi in a city is okay. The taxi helps you to get a place where you want. Almost Korean taxi driver can not speak English. So if you want to use a taxi, you should speak Korean or have a translator to communicate with them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Il Hwan,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)


If i give a tip for foreigners who comes to Korea. Maybe the first is that you never use a taxi in airport. 
>>>  If I'm going to give a tip for foreigners coming to Korea, the first one is that they should never use a taxi in the airport. 

There are some reasons. First, Korea has grate public transportation. 
>>> There are so many reasons; first Korea has great public transportation. 

Although you don't use a taxi, you never feel uncomfortable. 
>>> Although you don't use a taxi, you will never feel uncomfortable. 

Using a taxi is quit expensive than using public transportation.
>>> Using a taxi is quite expensive compared to public transportations.

Second, many taxi drivers will cheat you. 
>>> CORRECT

Many foreigners have experiences about taxi fare. 
>>> Many foreigners have experience with very high taxi fare. 

Basic taxi fare is about 3 dollars, but many taxi drivers demand foreigners for hundred dollars. 
>>> The basic taxi fare is about 3 dollars, but many taxi drivers demand foreigners for hundred dollars. 

We have an accusation system, but they couldn't report.
>>> We have a system where you can report, but foreigners couldn't report because of some reason.

Using a taxi in a city is okay. The taxi helps you to get a place where you want. 
>>> Using a taxi in a city is okay. The taxi helps you to get to a place where you want to go. 

Almost Korean taxi driver can not speak English. 
>>> Almost all Korean taxi drivers can not speak English. 

So if you want to use a taxi, you should speak Korean or have a translator to communicate with them.
>>> So if you want to use a taxi, you should speak Korean or you should have a translator to communicate with them.
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