무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

HI....

작성자: 조*현
2021-03-25 1773

회원님의 영작문

4. The woman's problem is that she has very important history paperwork, but electricity became blackout. So, the man suggested to go to library of jefeson's street which is not blackout. But, it is raining outside, it would very uncomfortable. because of lots of burdens. So, he said that she should tell her professor that today is raining and deadline has to be extention, and she said that prfessor already said that there is no extention. I think that she has to do homework today, it's because prf. already said ext. is not available about that paperwork, so firstly, she just gets charge her computer in lib. and then com back home and do her p.p work.
5.According to the lecture, the professor mainly talks about following other baby's crying to another baby. First of all, the professor takes 2experiements as examples to explain this. The situation is that one baby is crying, other babies join in. Because of noise.Researchers experimented on played for tape of recording own

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Here's your corrected composition, Jessica!

Cheers,
Jean~~



4. The woman's problem is that she has very important history paperwork, but electricity became blackout. 
>> The woman needed to do her very important history paperwork, but there was a power interruption.

So, the man suggested to go to library of jefeson's street which is not blackout. 
>> So, the man suggested going to the library on Jefeson's street because there was electricity in that area. 

But, it is raining outside, it would very uncomfortable. because of lots of burdens. 
>> But the woman disagreed with the man's suggestion since it was raining outside and it won't be easy to go out. 

So, he said that she should tell her professor that today is raining and deadline has to be extention, and she said that prfessor already said that there is no extention. 
>> Then he said that she should explain the situation to her professor and request for an extension, and she said that the professor already said that there is no extension. 

I think that she has to do homework today, it's because prf. already said ext. is not available about that paperwork, so firstly, she just gets charge her computer in lib. and then com back home and do her p.p work.
>> I think that she has to do her homework because her prf. already said that there won't be any extension, so first, she can charge her computer in the lib. and then go back home to do her p.p work.


번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
106737 My mother and father are good at cook. 김*랑 완료 2021-03-19 3654
106736 What is your usual morning routine? 김*하 완료 2021-03-19 4450
106735 Friday homework 류*우 완료 2021-03-19 3966
106734 Write about one of your favorite English movies. 오*경 완료 2021-03-19 4320
106733 Hi 변*훈 완료 2021-03-19 3657
106732 Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programs... 황*하 완료 2021-03-19 3303
106731 If you could change one thing in your personality, what would it... 이*준 완료 2021-03-19 3786
106730 Having goals = Power of Practice 강*구 완료 2021-03-19 4163
106729 Racist 조*주 완료 2021-03-19 5727
106728 Homework 함*주 완료 2021-03-19 2
106727 Where are you going after our class? 권*희 완료 2021-03-19 3780
106726 What historical place do you know well? 정*원 완료 2021-03-19 3737
106725 Homework 양*진 완료 2021-03-19 0
106724 homework 권*원 완료 2021-03-19 4464
106723 What do you think will happen if your country is overpopulated? 김*원 완료 2021-03-18 4128
106722 Homework (244) 박*하 완료 2021-03-18 3326
106721 Do you think it would be a good idea to have 3 days worth of... 김*원 완료 2021-03-18 3931
106720 What outdoor activities would you like to try soon? 김*국 완료 2021-03-18 3421
106719 How often do you order food for to go? 하*조 완료 2021-03-18 2946
106718 What do you think is the best way to prevent bullying in schools? 김*예 완료 2021-03-18 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]