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4. The woman's problem is that she has very important history paperwork, but electricity became blackout. 
>> The woman needed to do her very important history paperwork, but there was a power interruption.

So, the man suggested to go to library of jefeson's street which is not blackout. 
>> So, the man suggested going to the library on Jefeson's street because there was electricity in that area. 

But, it is raining outside, it would very uncomfortable. because of lots of burdens. 
>> But the woman disagreed with the man's suggestion since it was raining outside and it won't be easy to go out. 

So, he said that she should tell her professor that today is raining and deadline has to be extention, and she said that prfessor already said that there is no extention. 
>> Then he said that she should explain the situation to her professor and request for an extension, and she said that the professor already said that there is no extension. 

I think that she has to do homework today, it's because prf. already said ext. is not available about that paperwork, so firstly, she just gets charge her computer in lib. and then com back home and do her p.p work.
>> I think that she has to do her homework because her prf. already said that there won't be any extension, so first, she can charge her computer in the lib. and then go back home to do her p.p work.


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