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Depending on children's character, this makes an unexpected result. For instance, introvert children are susceptible to passive attitude when they are encouraged to try hard even before they start to do something.
To sum up, giving children kind of encouraging messages can bring about both effects. We should give children this messages according to their personalities.

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Depending on children's character, this makes an unexpected result. 
>> Correct!

For instance, introvert children are susceptible to passive attitude when they are encouraged to try hard even before they start to do something.
>> Correct!

To sum up, giving children kind of encouraging messages can bring about both effects. 
>> Correct!
Or: To sum it up, giving children kinds of encouraging messages can bring about both effects. 

We should give children this messages according to their personalities.
>> We should give children these messages according to their personalities.
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