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What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

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The first advantage is that you can learn the language in a short time. Because if you want to live a basic life, you have to learn a language. And if you learn a language, you can adapt to the country quickly and easily. If you have a weakness, you can get homesickness. Living abroad makes it emotionally difficult because you can't see your family and friends. And people who don't fit the food make it more difficult to adjust to life abroad.

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Hi Steve! I think both of them have advantages and disadvantages at the same time too. You can benefit a lot and have a hard time as well. It just depends on how you're going to handle your situation abroad. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

The first advantage is that you can learn the language in a short time. 
>>CORRECT

Because if you want to live a basic life, you have to learn a language. 
>> Because if you want to live a basic life, you have to learn the language in that place. 

And if you learn a language, you can adapt to the country quickly and easily. 
>> CORRECT

If you have a weakness, you can get homesickness. 
>> If you are weak, you can get homesickness. 

Living abroad makes it emotionally difficult because you can't see your family and friends. 
>> CORRECT

And people who don't fit the food make it more difficult to adjust to life abroad.
>>> People who can't adapt to the food in that place can make it more hard for them to live there. 

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