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(HW) Why is English fluency significant for you?

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I need 'English fluency' for my future job. In two years at the earliest, I might become an elementary school teacher and English fluency is essential skill for elementary school teacher to teach students. If I take charge of English class, I have to speak in English every classes, and my English abilities, such as pronunciation, grammar, fluency, etc, must be perfect. Because students will learn and take after my English fluency. So English fluency is significant for me.

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Thank you for this Gloria!
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I need 'English fluency' for my future job. 
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In two years at the earliest, I might become an elementary school teacher and English fluency is essential skill for elementary school teacher to teach students. 
>>>   In two years at the earliest, I might become an elementary school teacher and English fluency is an essential skill for an elementary school teacher to teach students. 
If I take charge of English class, I have to speak in English every classes, and my English abilities, such as pronunciation, grammar, fluency, etc, must be perfect. 
>>>  If I take charge of English class, I have to speak in English every class, and my English speaking abilities such as pronunciation, grammar, fluency, etc, must be perfect.   
Because students will learn and take after my English fluency. 
>>> correct   
So English fluency is significant for me.
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