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As technology advances, household appliances and goods became more expensive, creating a wide gap between the rich and the poor.
But the gap between the rich and the poor decreases because some technologies become cheaper.
For example food.
As technology is developed food that was expensive before becomes cheaper because it is produced a lot.
Therefore the gap between the rich and the poor varies depending on what technology developed.

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Friday is a time to reflect and be thankful for the week. As you count your blessings, may you have reasons to be joyful. 
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
As technology advances, household appliances and goods became more expensive, creating a wide gap between the rich and the poor.
>>> CORRECT
But the gap between the rich and the poor decreases because some technologies become cheaper.
>>> CORRECT
For example, food.
>>> CORRECT
As technology is developed food that was expensive before becomes cheaper because it is produced a lot.
>>> As technology develops food that has been expensive before becomes cheaper because it produced a lot.
Therefore the gap between the rich and the poor varies depending on what technology developed.
>>> Therefore the gap between the rich and the poor varies depending on the development of technology.
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