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When a person spends most of his or her time working a job with little job satisfaction, their life

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If people have a job, they spend most of their time at work. This is very important point, when we discuss about job satisfaction because it would be really hard for people to do their duty without job satisfaction. The relationship with their colleagues is also important due to same reason above. Of course, we can't be hired where we want to be, that's why we must try to find what I like, what I can be good at and so on before getting a job. I think people can be depressed, stressed and bored if they don't satisfy with their job. So, if I am working with less job satisfaction, I always think quitting a job and take the letter of resignation in my pocket even though I will not submit it. I guess that job satisfaction should be the first thing which people have to consider when they get a job. I know that it is almost impossible to find my talent before being adults. Therefore, schools and various organizations in the country have to invent the tools for it and provide proper ways t

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

JOYFUL MONDAY MR. HWANG~! ^^
It's Monday and it’s also a new day and a new week. Welcome back to the sweet comfort of learning! I know you miss studying with me ^^.  Cheers!
Have a great day~! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
If people have a job, they spend most of their time at work.
>>> CORRECT
 This is very important point, when we discuss about job satisfaction because it would be really hard for people to do their duty without job satisfaction.
>>> This is a very important point, when we discuss about job satisfaction because it would be really hard for people to do their duty without their job satisfaction.
The relationship with their colleagues is also important due to same reason above. 
>>> The relationship with their colleagues is also important due to the same reason above. 
Of course, we can't be hired where we want to be, that's why we must try to find what I like, what I can be good at and so on before getting a job. 
>>> Of course, we can't be hired where we want to be, that's why we must try to find what we like, what we can be good at and so on before getting a job. 
I think people can be depressed, stressed and bored if they don't satisfy with their job. 
>>> I think people can be depressed, stressed and bored if they aren't satisfied with their job. 
So, if I am working with less job satisfaction, I always think quitting a job and take the letter of resignation in my pocket even though I will not submit it.
>>> So, if I am working with less job satisfaction, I always think about quitting a job and take the letter of resignation in my pocket even though I will not submit it.
 I guess that job satisfaction should be the first thing which people have to consider when they get a job. 
>>> CORRECT
I know that it is almost impossible to find my talent before being adults.
>>> I know that it is almost impossible to find my talents before becoming an adult.
 Therefore, schools and various organizations in the country have to invent the tools for it and provide proper ways t
>>> CORRECT
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