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If I can be a bird, I want to be sparrow. This is because sparrows look so cute no matter what. Sparrows are among the fastest birds and are one of the birds that can be seen frequently in Korea. The last time I went to the park with my family, I tried to take a picture because there was a very pretty sparrow, but in the end it was too fast to take a picture. That time I think I want to be like that sparrow, because I'm very slow then my friends.

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Hi, happy Friday Maria!

I see sparrows everyday in my garden. Truly, they are so fast and cute. They are very faithful too as they always come and visit the plants on a regular basis.

Well, be like the sparrow. I know you are fast but you can be faster!

Thanks for writing your composition. You did a great job! See you next week.

-T. Donna =)

If I can be a bird, I want to be sparrow. 
>> Correct!

This is because sparrows look so cute no matter what. 
>> Correct!

Sparrows are among the fastest birds and are one of the birds that can be seen frequently in Korea.
>> Correct! 

The last time I went to the park with my family, I tried to take a picture because there was a very pretty sparrow, but in the end it was too fast to take a picture. 
>> Correct!

That time I think I want to be like that sparrow, because I'm very slow then my friends.
>> That time I thought I wanted to be like that sparrow, because I'm very slow compared to my friends.
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