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What will you do if you didn\'t do your purpose on a business trip?

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I am a software engineer. If I didn't do my purpose on a business trip, it will be a reason, I made a software which has errors or I misunderstood client's requirements. If it happens, I would come back to my office, And I analyze a problem. And I go on a business again. I will get a low evaluation, because of going on business trips twice. But finishing work is more import. The worst situation is making a problem in business trip when I go to other country. I can't come back, although I have problems. I should achieve business trip's goal while a business trip period. If I fail to achieve the goal, I have no choice. These days is better than before, because of the development of It environment.

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What will you do if you didn't do your purpose on a business trip?


I am a software engineer. 
>>> CORRECT

If I didn't do my purpose on a business trip, it will be a reason, I made a software which has errors or I misunderstood client's requirements.
>>> If I didn't do my purpose on a business trip because of the following reasons; I made software that has errors or I misunderstood the client's requirements. 

 If it happens, I would come back to my office, And I analyze a problem. And I go on a business again. 
>>> If it happens, I would come back to my office, and I analyze a problem then I'll go back. 

I will get a low evaluation, because of going on business trips twice. But finishing work is more import. 
>>> I will get a low evaluation, because of going on business trips twice but finishing work is more import. 

The worst situation is making a problem in business trip when I go to other country. 
>>> The worst situation is making a problem in a business trip in another country. 

I can't come back, although I have problems. 
>>> For the reason that I can't come back, although I have problems. 

I should achieve business trip's goal while a business trip period.
>>> I should achieve the business trip's goal in the allotted period. 

 If I fail to achieve the goal, I have no choice. 
>>> If I fail to achieve the goal, I have no choice but to make it work and succeed. 

These days is better than before, because of the development of It environment.
>>> These days are better than before, because of the development of the IT environment.
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