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What are the usual consequences of being tardy or absent?

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In my opinion, physical and mental conditions would be the usual circumstances of being either tardy or absent. It is challenging for people to do one best with a high fever or broken legs. These states would be the obstacles for the best performance. Maybe this is the reason why a company or school accepts absence with the doctor¡¯s note attached. Alongside this, the mental issue will cause a disastrous effect on the performance. People with a high level of depression and anxiety are susceptible to stress associated with professional or daily life. These people will miss out or neglect essential features which make them clumsy.

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In my opinion, physical and mental conditions would be the usual circumstances of being either tardy or absent. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR: In my opinion, one's physical and mental conditions are great factors that influence their being either tardy or absent.   
It is challenging for people to do one best with a high fever or broken legs. 
>>> OR: It is challenging for people to do their best with a high fever or broken legs. 
>>> OR: It is challenging for people to be at their best with a high fever or broken legs.   
These states would be the obstacles for the best performance. 
>>>  correct  
Maybe this is the reason why a company or school accepts absence with the doctor¡¯s note attached. 
>>> correct    
Alongside this, the mental issue will cause a disastrous effect on the performance. 
>>> correct   
People with a high level of depression and anxiety are susceptible to stress associated with professional or daily life. 
>>> correct 
>>> ORPeople with a high level of depression and anxiety are susceptible to stress which can affect their professional or daily life.  
These people will miss out or neglect essential features which make them clumsy.
>>>  correct  

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