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In the past, usually poeple thought that children or descendant should take care of their retired parents. But these days people including parents are tend not to think like that. Of course, me too. Since this generation society is much more difficult to get a job or own house and ask them to big money to raise their children. So, these days many parents are trying to prepare for period of after retiring.

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Hello, Ju Yeong. Thank you for accomplishing your homework once again. Change is inevitable and we need to adapt. It seems life is getting more and more challenging especially for the younger generation even in my country. It's a good thing we are adaptable beings.^^ Have a good one and I'll talk to you tomorrow. ~Teacher Jane c",)


In the past, usually poeple thought that children or descendant should take care of their retired parents.
>> In the past, usually, people thought that children or descendants should take care of their retired parents.

But these days people including parents are tend not to think like that.
>> But these days people, including parents, tend not to think like that/ not to think that way.

Of course, me too.
>> CORRECT =)

Since this generation society is much more difficult to get a job or own house and ask them to big money to raise their children.
>> In our current society, it's much more difficult for my generation to get a job, own a house, and we need to earn more money to raise our children.

So, these days many parents are trying to prepare for period of after retiring.
>> So, these days, many parents art trying to prepare for their retirement.
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