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Well, in my case, making limitations towards my friends is not easy-peasy especially lending money. As you know, money is a sensitive issue and it has to do with our trust. But, if my close want to lend my money and if is affordable to me I will lend it to my loved ones because I know her situation not to mention it can't help it.

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Hello there again Jane!

Thank you for answering my composition question. Talks about money is very complicated specially with friends. However, being compassionate is a good thing  because at times, people can really be in dire need of help in terms of finance.

Anyway, you know well your friends and their capacity to pay or not. Most importantly, you also know if your friendship is going to be based in some amount of money.

See you in class soon!

-T. Donna =) 

Well, in my case, making limitations towards my friends is not easy-peasy especially lending money. 
>> Correct!

As you know, money is a sensitive issue and it has to do with our trust. 
>>  Correct!

But, if my close want to lend my money and if is affordable to me I will lend it to my loved ones because I know her situation not to mention it can't help it.
>> But, if my close friend wants to borrow my money and if is affordable to me, I will lend it to my loved ones because I know her situation not to mention it can't help him/her.
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