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There are a few people who helped shape my personality.
The first is my parents and my sisters.
The second is the teachers who taught me.
The last is my companion.
And thing what helped shape my character is only faith.
I always have one thing to pray for.
That is that I should be humble.
Absolutely, I am not a modest person but I am trying to be that person.

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Hi Eun Ha!
This is really good work you have here. 
I hope you continue sharing your talent with other people as well.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon 
There are a few people who helped shape my personality.
>> Correct
The first is my parents and my sisters.
>> Correct
The second is the teachers who taught me.
>> Correct
The last is my companion.
>> The last is my partner. 
And thing what helped shape my character is only faith.
>> Finally, the thing that helped shape my character is faith.
I always have one thing to pray for.
>> Correct
That is that I should be humble.
>> That is to have the strength so I can continue being humble. 
Absolutely, I am not a modest person but I am trying to be that person.
>> Correct
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