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1. What is the importance of education?

This is important because we can use things that we learned from school in so many ways.

2. Do you think age is an important factor in going to school?

I don't think that is an important factor.

3. What is a good major in college for you?

I think the good major for me is the college that is focused in math.

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Hello there Geonha! Thank you for doing your homework today!

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This is important because we can use things that we learned from school in so many ways.
>>CORRECT

I don't think that is an important factor.
>>CORRECT

I think the good major for me is the college that is focused in math.
>>I think the good major for me in college is focused on Math.
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