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Today, i took a first web english class. I was very nervous but my teacher was very comfortable to me, so my tension was slowly down and maybe 10mintues after, i wasn't nervous. On the class, i told movie story about ½Â¸®È£(space sweepers). i very very want to tell movie story but my english speech level isn't good... So i thought i study hard in english!

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Hi Harry,
I'm happy that you had a class with me tonight. You did great in the class and tried your best to communicate with the teacher using the English language although you feel nervous. Don't worry I'm here to help you. Don't be nervous and be confident when speaking so that you can speak well. I know you will improve. Good luck.

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Today, i took a first web english class.
>> Today, I took a first online English class. 
 I was very nervous but my teacher was very comfortable to me, so my tension was slowly down and maybe 10mintues after, i wasn't nervous.
>>I was very nervous at first but my teacher was very comfortable with me, so my tension slowed down maybe after 10 minutes and I wasn't nervous anymore. 
 On the class, i told movie story about ½Â¸®È£(space sweepers). 
>> In the class, I told a story of a movie about ½Â¸®È£(space sweepers). 
i very very want to tell movie story but my english speech level isn't good...
>> I really want to tell the story of the movie story but my English speaking level isn't good.
So i thought i study hard in english!
>>  So, I think I need to study English hard. 

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Today, i took a first web english class. I was very nervous but my teacher was very comfortable to me, so my tension was slowly down and maybe 10mintues after, i wasn't nervous. On the class, i told movie story about ½Â¸®È£(space sweepers). i very very want to tell movie story but my english speech level isn't good... So i thought i study hard in english!
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