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They are both worth it but the social contribution of scientists are more valuable.
Especially in today's more virus world, scientists do research and develop something.
Also life is easy to research and develop robots and other things.
Life is easier with scientists.
Therefore I think it is the scientists who contribution more to society.

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LOVELY DAY TO YOU EDEN~! ^^
Be thankful for what you have; you¡¯ll end up having more. If you concentrate on what you don¡¯t have, you will never, ever have enough.
You¡¯re going to go through tough times - that¡¯s life. But I say, ¡®Nothing happens to you, it happens for you.¡¯ See the positive in negative events.
Have a nice day~! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
They are both worth it but the social contribution of scientists are more valuable.
>>> CORRECT
Especially in today's more virus world, scientists do research and develop something.
>>> CORRECT
Also life is easy to research and develop robots and other things.
>>> CORRECT
Life is easier with scientists.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore I think it is the scientists who contribution more to society.
>>> Therefore I think it is the scientists who contributes more to society.
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