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my pronunciation is omg...

작성자: 지*우
2021-03-30 1689

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As i learn online english class, i want to improve my pronunciation. Whenever I see fluent people in english, i envy their fluent english speaking but also their pronunciation. So i question my teacher 'how to study to improve my pronunciation 'R' and 'L' and my teacher says some words like collect,correct. The difficult thing of words is 'rather'. Pronouncing 'R' not also is difficult but 'th'..
Another my worry is that when i tell front of foreigner my tongue is like stone. Because my tongue is like stone, my pronunciation isn't well.. So i try to improve my pronunciation and speak a lot in class. In next class, i certainly try to speak 15minutes! If my teacher read this, please help me!!! Always thank you!!

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Hi Harry,
I enjoyed our class tonight. It's good to know that you like to improve your pronunciation because that's the first thing you need to learn to speak English clearly. I'm happy that you tried your best to practice the "R" and "L' sounds. Keep practicing and in no time you will improve and remove your fear of speaking English in front of foreigners. I suggest reading English books a loud would be very helpful for the improvement of your pronunciation.

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As i learn online english class, i want to improve my pronunciation. 
>> As I learn in my online English class, I want to improve my pronunciation. 
Whenever I see fluent people in english, i envy their fluent english speaking but also their pronunciation. 
>> Whenever I see people fluently speak English, I envy them because they can speak English fluently and they also have good pronunciation.  
So i question my teacher 'how to study to improve my pronunciation 'R' and 'L' 
>>So, I asked a question to my teacher 'about how to study and improve my pronunciation of 'R' and 'L' . 
and my teacher says some words like collect,correct.
>> My teacher said we need to practice pronouncing some words like collect, correct. 
The difficult thing of words is 'rather'. 
>> I'm having difficulty pronouncing the word "rather".
Pronouncing 'R' not also is difficult but 'th'..
>> It's difficult to pronounce the "R" and "TH" sound. 
Another my worry is that when i tell front of foreigner my tongue is like stone. Because my tongue is like stone, my pronunciation isn't well.
>> I'm worried about speaking in front of a foreigner because my tongue will become hard like a stone and it's difficult for me to pronounce English words well. 
So i try to improve my pronunciation and speak a lot in class.
>> So, I try my best to speak more in the class to improve my English skills.
In next class, i certainly try to speak 15minutes!
>> In the next class, I certainly try to speak for 15minutes! 
 If my teacher read this, please help me!!! Always thank you!!
>> If my teacher reads this, I want her to help me to improve my English skills. !!! Always thank you!!


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As i learn online english class, i want to improve my pronunciation. Whenever I see fluent people in english, i envy their fluent english speaking but also their pronunciation. So i question my teacher 'how to study to improve my pronunciation 'R' and 'L' and my teacher says some words like collect,correct. The difficult thing of words is 'rather'. Pronouncing 'R' not also is difficult but 'th'..
Another my worry is that when i tell front of foreigner my tongue is like stone. Because my tongue is like stone, my pronunciation isn't well.. So i try to improve my pronunciation and speak a lot in class. In next class, i certainly try to speak 15minutes! If my teacher read this, please help me!!! Always thank you!!
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