¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of Online Selling and buying?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*±¹
2021-03-30 1494

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I think as below. It is no need to visit directly any market, mart, department store. It is more convenient than face to face marketing.
But peoples cannot try to wear the clothes and taste the food. Online prices is generally cheaper than offline, because it can save a number of workers. It is a difficult thing to return the product when you don't satisfy the product that you ordered at online buying.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Sir Mandeep! Thank you for taking time in answering the question. Here are some of the corrections, but other than that, you did great! :)
~ T. Camille

I think as below. 
>> As stated below, there's no need to visit directly any market, mart, or department stores.

It is no need to visit directly any market, mart, department store. 
>> As stated below, there's no need to visit directly any market, mart, or department stores.

It is more convenient than face to face marketing.
>> CORRECT!

But peoples cannot try to wear the clothes and taste the food. 
>> The only thing is, people cannot try to wear the clothes, and taste the food.

Online prices is generally cheaper than offline, because it can save a number of workers.
>> Online prices are generally cheaper than offline, because it can save a number of workers.

It is a difficult thing to return the product when you don't satisfy the product that you ordered at online buying.
>> It is a difficult thing to return the product when you aren't satisfied with the product that you ordered online.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
106994 How do you keep yourself updated? ÇÏ*Á¶ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-29 2635
106993 How do you manage your stress? ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-29 2055
106992 How can the public transportation in your city be improved? ÀÌ*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-29 1248
106991 What are the important things to remember during an emergency... ±Ç*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2021-03-29 2164
106990 What will you do if you didn\'t do your purpose on a business... ±è*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 1453
106989 Homework ÀÌ*¾Ö ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 5
106988 I hate using computers. ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 2239
106987 Should there be a limit on how many children there should be in... ±è*¿­ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 1661
106986 Should there be a limit on how many children there should be in... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 0
106985 How can the public transportation in your city be improved? ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 0
106984 Would you like to recommend a cosmetic brand to me? What is it? ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 3
106983 Should there be a limit on how many children there should be in... Çã*´Ã ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 1
106982 How can the public transportation in your city be improved? Çã*´Ã ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 1
106981 In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work.... Á¤*¼º ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 3053
106980 Lilac ( IU) ¾È*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 6
106979 What do you like to do on the weekend? ±è*±¹ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 1621
106978 My favorite holiday ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 1
106977 White supremacy and hate are haunting Asian Americans À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 1
106976 By the end of the century, summer weather could last half a year... À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 1
106975 What would you like to do if you don\'t have any schedule? ¼Û*·É ¿Ï·á 2021-03-28 2571

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04