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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

. Can you explain this proverb in other words? \"Save your pennies for a rainy day.\"

작성자: 권*원
2021-03-31 1400

회원님의 영작문

This proverb means that you have to prepare for some things in case of difficult situations.
If we are an athlete, we have to exercise hard every day in case of Olympics.
Also, if we go to abroad as an exchange student, we should study that country’s language.
If we are prepared, we can endure under any difficult circumstances.
For example, one of my friends forgot to prepare for clock on the day of SAT test.
Even though he couldn’t check the time, he got a good score because he had taken a test without a clock in case of the worst situation.
On the other hand, when I was in Japan, I had trouble adjusting the language because I hadn’t studied Japanese hard.
In conclusion, the proverb means only a prepared person can seize an opportunity under any difficult circumstances.
(I have to start my work from Thursday. So, after I work this week, If I think I can take this class while working, I will apply again that time. Sorry for not reapplying now. Thank you for teaching me!)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Cleo! You always write with sense that's why I always feel excited to read your homework. Anyway, thank you for sharing your situation now, I am happy that you finally start working. I should say that it is the fruit of your labor. I hope you meet nice coworkers! See you later!-Faith-
This proverb means that you have to prepare for some things in case of difficult situations.
>> CORRECT
OR The proverb implies that we must be ready in case of emergency.
If we are an athlete, we have to exercise hard every day in case of Olympics.
>> If we are athletes, we have to exercise hard every day in case of an upcoming Olympics.
Also, if we go to abroad as an exchange student, we should study that country’s language.
>> Also, if we go abroad as an exchange student, we should study that country’s language.
If we are prepared, we can endure under any difficult circumstances.
>> If we are prepared, we can endure any difficult circumstances.
For example, one of my friends forgot to prepare for clock on the day of SAT test.
>> For example, one of my friends forgot to prepare his timer on the day of SAT test.
Even though he couldn’t check the time, he got a good score because he had taken a test without a clock in case of the worst situation.
>> Even though he couldn’t check the time, he got a good score because he had taken the test without a timer in case of a worst situation.
On the other hand, when I was in Japan, I had trouble adjusting the language because I hadn’t studied Japanese hard.
>> On the other hand, when I was in Japan, I had trouble adjusting to their language because I hadn’t studied Japanese hard.
In conclusion, the proverb means only a prepared person can seize an opportunity under any difficult circumstances.
>> CORRECT
I have to start my work from Thursday. 
>> CORRECT
So, after I work this week, If I think I can take this class while working, I will apply again that time. 
>> So, after I work this week, if I think I can take this class while working, I will apply again that time. 
Sorry for not reapplying now. 
>> CORRECT
Thank you for teaching me!
>> CORRECT

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