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What is your favorite season and why?

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1. What is your favorite season and why?
My favorite season is spring. Spring is a beautiful time when flowers bloom. I can watch the nature is alive and many of creatures are
growing up more faster and bigger. That is why I really like spring.
2. How do you season affect you attitude?
I really dislike being freezing cold in winter boiling hot in summer. In winter, I can`t go outside for a long time and there is no way to
have to stay at indoor frequently. In summer, I am lazy, so I have to take a nap because of hot and warm weather. Working out seasons
are spring and fall. I really like spring as well as autumn.

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Hi Huje,
Thank you for your ideas today!
Have a fantastic day and a great weekend!
Talk to you next week then!
Teacher Elly.
What is your favorite season and why?
1. What is your favorite season and why?
My favorite season is spring. 
CORRECT!
or>>My most preferred season is usually spring. 
Spring is a beautiful time when flowers bloom. 
>>Spring is a beautiful season because the flowers bloom. 
I can watch the nature is alive and many of creatures are growing up more faster and bigger. 
>>I can observe the nature. It feels so alive and many of the creatures are growing bigger very quickly. 
That is why I really like spring.
CORRECT!
or>>This is the reason why I really love spring.
2. How do you season affect you attitude?
>>How does the season affect your attitude?
I really dislike being freezing cold in winter boiling hot in summer. 
>>I really dislike the freezing cold in winter, and the boiling hot temperature in summer. 
In winter, I can`t go outside for a long time and there is no way to have to stay at indoor frequently. 
>>In winter, I can`t go outside for a long time and it's impossible to stay indoors for the whole day. 
In summer, I am lazy, so I have to take a nap because of hot and warm weather. 
>>In summer, I am lazy, so I have to take a nap because of the hot and warm weather. 
Working out seasons are spring and fall. 
>>During spring and fall, most people prefer to workout during these seasons. 
I really like spring as well as autumn.
CORRECT!
or>>I really love both the spring and autumn seasons.
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