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My favorite topic is scrapbook

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My favortie topic is scrapbook, because I have a lot of scrapbook. Sometimes I make a scrapbook, also I chose my favorite topic and make it. Like "my favorite food", "my favorite country", "my family". This is not something that only people with good hands can do. Even if you're not good with your hands, you just have to put the picture where you want to put it and decorate it as you please. This is why I like scrapbook. I don't have good hands, so I'm not good at drawing(I like drawing, but not good at), but this scrapbook is doesn't have to good at drawing or painting. Just put the picture and decorate!

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Hello there again Maria!

Scrapbook is so interesting! I have never done anything like this before. I hope someday someone could teach me how to make it.

Thanks for showing me your very beautiful and informative scrapbook. It is like a diary but even better!

See you again soon!

-T. Donna =)

My favortie topic is scrapbook, because I have a lot of scrapbook. 
>> Correct!
Or: favorite (SPELLING)

Sometimes I make a scrapbook, also I chose my favorite topic and make it. 
>>Sometimes I make a scrapbook. Also, I choose my favorite topic and make it. 

Like "my favorite food", "my favorite country", "my family". 
>> Correct!
Or:  Like "My Favorite Food", "My Favorite Country", and  "My Family"

This is not something that only people with good hands can do.
>> Correct!

Even if you're not good with your hands, you just have to put the picture where you want to put it and decorate it as you please. 
>> Correct!

This is why I like scrapbook. I don't have good hands, so I'm not good at drawing(I like drawing, but not good at), but this scrapbook is doesn't have to good at drawing or painting. 
>> This is why I like scrapbook. I don't have good hands, so I'm not good at drawing(I like drawing, but not good at it), but this scrapbook doesn't have to be good at drawing or painting. 

Just put the picture and decorate!
>> Correct!
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