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I think that I open my own mouth(a little bit...)

작성자: 지*우
2021-04-01 1840

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Today in the class i did a lot of grammar mistakes about dividing past and present form. Certainly, my teacher said 'Be careful. When you say past event, you must use verb that is past form. But i was hurry to speak about my thinking and i don't mind my grammar. Just today class, i did grammar mistakes about 5 times.. In the next class, i keep my grammar mistakes in mind and try to fix!
So now i say about title. I think i said today more than yesterday. I think that I open my own mouth! I'm really so happy!(Do teacher agree?..) Becoming better i speak english is almost because my teacher(I don't express this sentence..). In the rest of class, i really expect to change my english speaking level!! And Next week, on Monday, I bring things that i need to speak english by myself like the last class!
On weekends that isn't my teacher :(, i will watch recording class and review teacher fixed my grammar and practice my pronunciation! I want to hurry next class! Have a good Holiday Teacher~!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Harry, 
You sound happy and in a good mood to study tonight. I'm happy that you are receptive to my corrections and you want to keep in mind the advice that I told you.  I can see your eagerness to learn and improve your English skills. That's great! Keep up the good attitude towards learning and you will achieve your goal to improve your English skills. See you next week. Have a great weekend. 
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Today in the class i did a lot of grammar mistakes about dividing past and present form. 
>> Today in the class I did a lot of grammar mistakes about past and present forms in a sentence.
Certainly, my teacher said 'Be careful. 
>> Certainly, my teacher said 'Be careful. 
When you say past event, you must use verb that is past form. 
>>When you say the past event, you must use a verb that is past form.
But i was hurry to speak about my thinking and i don't mind my grammar.
>>But I was in a hurry to speak about my ideas and I don't mind my grammar.
Just today class, i did grammar mistakes about 5 times.. 
>>Just today's class, I did grammar mistakes about 5 times.
In the next class, i keep my grammar mistakes in mind and try to fix!
>>In the next class, I'll keep in mind my grammar mistakes and try to fix them!
So now i say about title.
>>So now I only construct simple sentences.
I think i said today more than yesterday. 
>> I think I speak more today than yesterday. 
I think that I open my own mouth! 
>>I think that I need to open my mouth when I'm speaking. 
I'm really so happy!(Do teacher agree?..) 
>>I'm really so happy! (Do you agree teacher?..)
Becoming better i speak english is almost because my teacher(I don't express this sentence..)
>>I can almost speak English better because of my teacher. (I can't express what I want to say).
In the rest of class, i really expect to change my english speaking level!! 
>> In the rest of the class, I really expect to change my English speaking level!
And Next week, on Monday, I bring things that i need to speak english by myself like the last class!
>>  And next week on Monday, I'll bring things that I need to speak English well by myself like in the last class!
On weekends that isn't my teacher :(, i will watch recording class and review teacher fixed my grammar and practice my pronunciation! 
>>This weekend that I don't have a class with my teacher :(, I will watch the class recording and review what the teacher sent me to fix my grammar and practice my pronunciation! 
I want to hurry next class! 
>> I want to hurry next class! 
Have a good Holiday Teacher~!
>>Have a good Holiday Teacher~!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Today in the class i did a lot of grammar mistakes about dividing past and present form. Certainly, my teacher said 'Be careful. When you say past event, you must use verb that is past form. But i was hurry to speak about my thinking and i don't mind my grammar. Just today class, i did grammar mistakes about 5 times.. In the next class, i keep my grammar mistakes in mind and try to fix!
So now i say about title. I think i said today more than yesterday. I think that I open my own mouth! I'm really so happy!(Do teacher agree?..) Becoming better i speak english is almost because my teacher(I don't express this sentence..). In the rest of class, i really expect to change my english speaking level!! And Next week, on Monday, I bring things that i need to speak english by myself like the last class!
On weekends that isn't my teacher :(, i will watch recording class and review teacher fixed my grammar and practice my pronunciation! I want to hurry next class! Have a good Holiday Teacher~!
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