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Is aging more difficult for men or women? Why?

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I think that aging is more difficult for women.
Because many women can make their meals themselves well.
But for men, they have difficult time making their meals and doing their households well.
Also men get stressed out a lot from their work.
Many of women also get stressed, but they relieve stress as they talk with their friends.
If the man relieves their stress with outgoing activities, it would be better.
Come to think of it, aging is not related to gender, but it is related to the habit of life or one's thought on life.
So I recommend we should live with developing mind and relieve our stress with good method.

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Hi Tae Juliet~ Grateful Monday to the both of us! 
Thanks for doing your homework! Thanks for sharing:)
>>> TEACHER James
I think that aging is more difficult for women.
>>> CORRECT
Because many women can make their meals themselves well.
>>> CORRECT
But for men, they have difficult time making their meals and doing their households well.
>>> But for men, they have a difficult time making their meals and doing their households well.
Also men get stressed out a lot from their work.
>>> Also, men get stressed out a lot from their work.
Many of women also get stressed, but they relieve stress as they talk with their friends.
>>> Many women also get stressed, but they relieve stress as they talk with their friends.
If the man relieves their stress with outgoing activities, it would be better.
>>> CORRECT
Come to think of it, aging is not related to gender, but it is related to the habit of life or one's thought on life.
>>> CORRECT
So I recommend we should live with developing mind and relieve our stress with good method.
>>> CORRECT
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