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Do you think you will surely succeed if you study hard? Why or why not?

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Many people are trying to study hard to succeed.
I think it surely will succeed if someone studies hard.
But it will be different when he or she succeed.
Because the quantity of effort is different.
Just their period of blooming is different I think.

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Good morning Juliet! Thank you so much for your thoughts regarding this topics. I appreciate it. 
Sincerely
T. James
Many people are trying to study hard to succeed.
>>> CORRECT
I think it surely will succeed if someone studies hard.
>>> I think someone will surely succeed if he/she studies hard. 
But it will be different when he or she succeed.
>>> But it will be different when he or she succeeds.
Because the quantity of effort is different.
>>> CORRECT
Just their period of blooming is different I think.
>>> CORRECT
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