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What is the weather like in your country for each season?

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1. What is the weather like in your country for each season?
In summer, the weather is a lot of shiny and rainy day each other. the temperature is getting hot. In winter, The weather is getting cold.
there are cold wind and snow days. In spring and fall season, the weather is bright day. The temperature is mild to be active outdoor
for many people.
2. How can extreme weather conditions affect the economy and our social life?

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Hi Huje,
Thank you so much for today's ideas!
Have a nice day!
Teacher Elly.
What is the weather like in your country for each season?
1. What is the weather like in your country for each season?
In summer, the weather is a lot of shiny and rainy day each other. the temperature is getting hot. 
>>In summer, the weather has a lot of sunny and rainy days. The temperature gets really hot.
In winter, The weather is getting cold.
>>In winter, the weather is cold.
there are cold wind and snow days. 
>>There are cold and windy days, as well as snowy days. 
In spring and fall season, the weather is bright day. 
>>During spring and fall seasons, the weather has very bright days. 
The temperature is mild to be active outdoor
for many people.
>>The temperature is mild so many people can do some activities outdoors.
2. How can extreme weather conditions affect the economy and our social life?
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or>>How do extreme weather conditions influence the economy and our social life?
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