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I agree to a certain extent.
Teachersare people who have learned professionally in college.
Therefore they will know how to help children's intelligence and social development.
But there is a certain limit because one teacher teaches many children.
On the contrary, parents can have more influence because they have more time with their children and can focus only one them.
Therefore, both teachers and parents have an effect.

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LOVELY MONDAY EDEN~! ^^
Success doesn¡¯t happen overnight. And the most successful individuals are those who are willing to put in a productive day¡¯s work before they even receive success.
Aim to go higher.~!^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
***********************
I agree to a certain extent.
>>> CORRECT
Teachers are people who have learned professionally in college.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore they will know how to help children's intelligence and social development.
>>> CORRECT
But there is a certain limit because one teacher teaches many children.
>>> CORRECT
On the contrary, parents can have more influences because they have more time with their children and can focus only one them.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore, both teachers and parents have an effect.
>>> Therefore, both teachers and parents have influences. 
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