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It is a negative development.
They can conveniently sign up with personal information but it is very dangerous.
Because they could be hacked.
Also, they hack into personal information and use it in strange palces and spam text messages come.
I hope there will be a way to enter without using up personal information.

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
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It is a negative development.
>>> CORRECT
They can conveniently sign up with personal information but it is very dangerous.
>>> CORRECT
Because they could be hacked.
>>> CORRECT
Also, they hack into personal information and use it in strange palces and spam text messages come.
>>> Also, they hack into personal information and use it in strange places and spam text messages.
I hope there will be a way to enter without using up personal information.
>>> CORRECT

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