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What is your favorite TV program?

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I do not enjoy a TV program lately. But, there is a peogram named 'I am a natural person' which is a kind of documentary about people who live in nature alone. When I have a chance to watch TV, I always search this program . They are living alone inside tge wood without any civilization stuff. Of course they have family and another life before becoming a natural man. However, they experienced harsh failures and big mistakes in their lives. They might be very exhausted from people and societies which they were belonged.
So, they decided to live alone departed from people's concerns, just like natural man. While I am watching that TV program, I can take a time to reflect on myself.

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Hello again Young Won!

I watch a similar tv series called " Naked and Afraid" where in a pair of man and woman live together naked in the forest and have to build shelter, hunt for food, and survive the place for 21 days.

These kinds of tv programs are educational also artificial. Let's discuss them in class tomorrow.

Thanks for sending me this composition, well done!

-T. Donna =)

I do not enjoy a TV program lately. But, there is a peogram named 'I am a natural person' which is a kind of documentary about people who live in nature alone.
>> I do not enjoy a TV program lately but, there is a program named 'I am a Natural Person' which is a kind of a documentary about people who live in nature alone.
 
When I have a chance to watch TV, I always search this program . 
>> When I have a chance to watch TV, I always search for this program. 

They are living alone inside tge wood without any civilization stuff. 
>> They are living alone inside the woods without any civilization stuff. 

Of course they have family and another life before becoming a natural man. 
>> Correct!

However, they experienced harsh failures and big mistakes in their lives. 
>> Correct!

They might be very exhausted from people and societies which they were belonged.
>> They might be very exhausted from people and societies which they belong to.

So, they decided to live alone departed from people's concerns, just like natural man. 
>> Correct!

While I am watching that TV program, I can take a time to reflect on myself.
>> Correct!
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