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Why is English fluency significant for you?

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English fluency is very significant for me for two reasons.
One is to communicate with foreign customers smoothly. I often speak with them to understand what they say and what they need
to report them to my boss and to satisfy their needs. It is basic skill for my work.
However, it is not easy for me to understand when natives speak in English quickly. I am very shy and embarrassed when my colleauges figured out what I didn't understand it well.
Another reason is that my poor English skill causes my confidence down. It influences on my private life and feeling.

In conclusion, I should improve my English skill fluently to make my work ability better and to enhance my confidence.

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Hello Sir Peter. Thank you for this. 

English fluency is very significant for me for two reasons.
>>> correct   
One is to communicate with foreign customers smoothly. 
>>> correct     
I often speak with them to understand what they say and what they need to report them to my boss and to satisfy their needs. 
>>> OR:  I often speak with them to understand what they say and what they need then report it to my boss and to satisfy their needs.   
It is basic skill for my work.
>>> It is a basic skill needed for my work.    
However, it is not easy for me to understand when natives speak in English quickly. 
>>> correct
>>> OR: However, it is not easy for me to understand antive English speakers when they talk in a fast pace.
I am very shy and embarrassed when my colleauges figured out what I didn't understand it well.
>>>  I am very shy and embarrassed when my colleagues figured out that I didn't understand it well.   
Another reason is that my poor English skill causes my confidence down. 
>>> OR:   Another reason is that my poor English skill decreases my confidence.   
It influences on my private life and feeling.
>>>  It has influences on my private life and feeling.
>> OR: It can affect my private life and feeling.
In conclusion, I should improve my English skill fluently to make my work ability better and to enhance my confidence.
>>>  correct   
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